庸非（陈黎明） 发表于 2025-10-1 15:55:50

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胡疏影 发表于 2025-10-1 17:46:14

观察入微，比喻新颖，向老师学习

成老师 发表于 2025-10-2 04:34:41

欣赏学习:victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory:

成老师 发表于 2025-10-2 04:34:56

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成老师 发表于 2025-10-2 04:35:13

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墨香醉 发表于 2025-10-4 12:56:04

以拟人化笔触写胭脂花占石椅而眠，将雨润花瓣、鸟扰花眠的场景写得鲜活俏皮，满是自然生机与童真意趣。

楼剡 发表于 2025-10-6 10:55:27

特别特别好。

心想事成2000 发表于 2025-10-7 20:07:23

意境深远
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