江南吴越 发表于 2026-6-9 07:17:13

吴越 诗《燕雀》

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羊耕 发表于 2026-6-9 09:24:28

点赞好诗！:victory::victory::victory:

成老师 发表于 2026-6-9 09:57:53

欣赏吴越社长佳作超赞:victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory:

成老师 发表于 2026-6-9 09:58:16

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成老师 发表于 2026-6-9 09:58:28

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成老师 发表于 2026-6-9 09:58:41

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金襄 发表于 2026-6-9 10:10:56

该诗以燕雀自咏，立意平和冲淡。前两联描摹日常行迹，写燕雀平凡起居、觅食筑巢，画面质朴烟火气浓；颈联一转，以燕雀无心高远云天、只牵挂幼雏，对比鲲鹏之志，不求宏大功名，偏重居家温情；尾联升华主旨：万物禀赋不同、境遇各异，大有大的驰骋，小有小的安稳，不攀附、不艳羡，安分守己、各安宿命，淡然穿行于凡尘烟火间。语言清雅凝练，对仗工整，心境恬淡豁达，藏着知足守拙、归于平淡的人生态度。

胡疏影 发表于 2026-6-9 10:49:55

学习老师佳作！

江南吴越 发表于 2026-6-9 11:08:26

谢谢金老师:handshake

智慧八方 发表于 2026-6-9 11:25:31

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