人文八婺 发表于 2026-6-28 21:16:14

义乌兵（歌词）

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成老师 发表于 2026-6-29 09:27:05

欣赏佳作超赞:victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory:

成老师 发表于 2026-6-29 09:27:20

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成老师 发表于 2026-6-29 09:27:34

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成老师 发表于 2026-6-29 09:29:02

歌词追求韵律和谐，在韵律方面是否还要下点功夫？:):)
个人愚见，仅供参考

大美北苑 发表于 2026-6-29 10:21:42

欣赏学习！

文明义鸟 发表于 2026-6-29 12:14:55

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