蜉蝣——社课作业一首
<!----><style type="text/css">html{font-size:375%}</style><link href="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/static/publish/css/style.css?v=20240712" rel="stylesheet" position="1" data-qf-origin="/static/publish/css/style.css?v=20240712"><!-- 付费贴--> <div class="preview_article "> <!----> <h2>蜉蝣</h2><h2>水际翩飞一枕梦，</h2><h2>朝来起舞暮成空。</h2><h2>休言命薄光华逝，</h2><h2>倏忽芳菲色亦浓。</h2><h2 class="empty_paragraph"></h2><p class="empty_paragraph"> </p><p class="">绣湖骚客简析：</p><p class=""> </p><p class="">读这一首咏蜉蝣绝句，不叹浮生短促，反于刹那之间寻取光彩，立意便跳出寻常窠臼。</p><p class=""> </p><p class="">古来写蜉蝣，多半感慨生命微渺，伤叹朝生暮死。此篇起笔“水际翩飞一枕梦，朝来起舞暮成空”，如实道尽蜉蝣生命本相，水边翩跹，如梦似幻，朝舞暮殒，把物种的宿命轻轻铺展纸上。</p><p class=""> </p><p class="">妙在转句翻出新意，“休言命薄光华逝”，一笔扫去世人怜惜悲叹。不沉溺于寿命之短，转而看重绽放之盛，结句“倏忽芳菲色亦浓”最为见骨。生命纵然倏忽一瞬，只要尽情绽放，自有馥郁光彩，不在于岁月长短，而在于刹那风华。</p><p class=""> </p><p class="">全诗起承转合妥帖，由物及理，借小虫抒发旷达襟怀。不做哀鸣，自有昂扬之致。物小而意不浅，短短二十八字，寄寓了对生命价值别样的思考。</p><p class=""> </p><p class="">编辑：江南</p><p class=""> </p> <!----></div> 欣赏佳作超赞:victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory: https://pics-app.cnyw.net/admin_FsbLrH4XpF1aok8fg1u_Me6G4sVj.png送出团圆月x1 https://pics-app.cnyw.net/admin_FsbLrH4XpF1aok8fg1u_Me6G4sVj.png送出团圆月x1 已转发各大群！ 欣赏佳作！:victory::victory::victory:
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