季节柳 发表于 2026-8-29 16:21:06

拜读：《故乡的河流》有感 诗歌/羊耕

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方言(岩) 发表于 2026-8-29 18:57:32

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方言(岩) 发表于 2026-8-29 18:58:37

精彩诗评！

成老师 发表于 2026-8-29 19:04:53

欣赏羊耕老师佳作超赞:victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory:

成老师 发表于 2026-8-29 19:15:42

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成老师 发表于 2026-8-29 19:16:07

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成老师 发表于 2026-8-29 19:17:34

羊耕老师的诗歌，有宽度，有高度，有深度，有温度！


成老师 发表于 2026-8-29 19:18:11

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风轻云淡ojq 发表于 2026-8-29 23:05:30

已经步入下旬，时间的长河依然哗哗流淌着，与其坐在岸边思虑太多，不如随其流动并暗示自己——

只愿蓬勃生活在此时此刻，无所谓去哪，无所谓见谁。那些我将要去的地方，都是我从未谋面的故乡。

九月底 发表于 2026-8-29 23:18:56

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