心想事成2000 发表于 2026-9-2 20:25:02

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<!----><style type="text/css">html{font-size:375%}</style><link href="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/static/publish/css/style.css?v=20240712" rel="stylesheet" position="1" data-qf-origin="/static/publish/css/style.css?v=20240712"><!--    付费贴-->    <div class="preview_article ">            <!---->    <p>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 吃晚饭了,全家人都盛好面条陆陆续续围着圆桌坐下。正当吃时,小妹捧着的碗不小心被绑了一下,整碗面条扑倒在爸爸身</p><p>上,烫的爸爸跳了起来,惊慌失措。二女儿小燕失声笑了,&ldquo;哈哈哈哈&rdquo;,还没笑完,妈妈的筷子就雨点般向小燕头上敲来,小燕还没弄明白是什么事情,爸爸大吼一声:&ldquo;你打小燕干嘛?&rdquo;&ldquo;你问他笑什么?傻子一样,好像不像。&rdquo;爸爸护在小燕身前,眼看一场暴风雨就要来临,姐姐小静一句话力挽狂澜:&ldquo;妈妈,每次小妹出事情都要拿小燕当出气筒干嘛?&rdquo;这样妈妈在白了小燕一眼,走进厨房。</p><p>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 这时小燕也没有胃口了,独自放下碗筷,离开饭桌,走向窗口,看看天空,暮色沉沉,白云轻浮在一望明月身旁,多惬意。星星们在天上向小燕眨眨眼,小燕叹了口冷气,面对夜幕下一扇扇亮着暖灯的光,沉沉的思量:这些灯下是不是也发生着她家一样的闹剧,或者别家妈妈正笑眯眯看着自己的孩子陶醉在喷香的晚餐里&hellip;&hellip;</p><p>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 小燕感觉到,一只宽厚的手掌带着暖流轻抚在她的肩上,小燕含着泪的眼,悄悄的望着满脸生疼的爸爸,爸爸把小燕的头按在胸口,轻轻的拍了拍小燕的头。男性磁中音:&ldquo;走,爸爸带你吃大排面。&rdquo;</p><p>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;来到兰州拉面馆,爸爸买了两大碗牛肉拉面,小燕咽了咽口水,眼眶一热,妈妈带她三姐妹吃大排面的场景历历在目,妈妈总是四个人买三碗,她自己一碗,然后姐姐与妹妹一人一碗。小燕总是妈妈拿个小碗,从每碗里拿出几条拉面,放在小碗里让小燕吃。今天突然爸爸让她一个人吃一大碗,受宠若惊,嘴巴紧闭,眼泪扑嗒扑嗒滚下来,爸爸用筷子在她碗里搅拌了几下,深感愧疚的眼神注视着小燕,爸爸知道你不懂妈妈为什么如此对你,因为你长得如同奶奶,一个模子里刻出来的!</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p class="empty_paragraph">&nbsp;</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/forum/20260902202456front2_0_1007311_FupON2JMDygfL0uqwEfB95osUMkb.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="720" height="1280" data-qf-origin="forum/20260902202456front2_0_1007311_FupON2JMDygfL0uqwEfB95osUMkb.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p class="empty_paragraph">&nbsp;</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/forum/20260902202456front2_0_1007311_Fgkg0Y-LQ7_hEky3VkyFexvMINE6.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="720" height="1280" data-qf-origin="forum/20260902202456front2_0_1007311_Fgkg0Y-LQ7_hEky3VkyFexvMINE6.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p class="empty_paragraph">&nbsp;</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/forum/20260902202456front2_0_1007311_FloKfeCpmCwC4jXgKdOwemvzToCC.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="1280" height="720" data-qf-origin="forum/20260902202456front2_0_1007311_FloKfeCpmCwC4jXgKdOwemvzToCC.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</p><p class="empty_paragraph">&nbsp;</p><p class="empty_paragraph">&nbsp;</p>    <!----></div>            

大美北苑 发表于 2026-9-2 20:35:34

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细心的坛友 发表于 2026-9-2 20:44:14

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成老师 发表于 2026-9-2 20:44:45

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成老师 发表于 2026-9-2 20:45:27

心理描写、神态描写,相当不错!
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成老师 发表于 2026-9-2 20:45:46

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成老师 发表于 2026-9-3 02:19:13

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成老师 发表于 2026-9-3 05:00:17

真诚地感谢你勤奋创作,为你自己也为绣湖文学、义乌文学的发展,作出了较大贡献!
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心想事成2000 发表于 2026-9-3 20:38:53

谢谢老师们的点赞与评论
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