读潘爱娟《我站在铜山岩上眺望义亭》有感
<!----><style type="text/css">html{font-size:375%}</style><link href="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/static/publish/css/style.css?v=20240712" rel="stylesheet" position="1" data-qf-origin="/static/publish/css/style.css?v=20240712"><!-- 付费贴--> <div class="preview_article "> <!----> <p>读潘爱娟《我站在铜山岩上眺望义亭》有感</p><p>吴越/文</p><p> </p><p>潘爱娟老师曾任义乌市作家协会副主席，多年深耕本土文学创作，对乌伤大地的风土人文了然于心。这首《我站在铜山岩上眺望义亭》，以登高远眺为线索，将义亭风物徐徐铺展，章法井然，气韵舒展。</p><p> </p><p>开篇聚焦铜山岩本体，精准捕捉狮形山崖的独特气韵，援引古题诗句，融山崖胜景，古寺梵宇于笔端，层层夯实千年人文底蕴，稳稳撑起全篇厚重的历史底色。</p><p> </p><p>诗人取景由近及远，由微及宏，从岩畔草木，水库云影，铺展至阡陌田园，通衢大道。诗中尽是义亭独有的乡土印记：红糖醇香，缸窑文脉，陇头朱稻虾共生的田园新景，以及敲糖人逐梦兴业，乡村迭代焕新的时代风貌。句句皆是本土实景，字字饱含桑梓深情，读来温润亲切，直抵人心。</p><p> </p><p>全诗以“我站在铜山岩上把义亭眺望”反复咏叹，一唱三叠，章法稳健，层层递进。前幅描摹古岩梵音，湖山灵秀，清幽雅致；后幅书写城乡蝶变，产业新生，朝气盎然。古地文脉与当代烟火相融相生，意境浑然一体。</p><p> </p><p>潘老师遣词温润从容，造句舒展大气。写景细腻灵动，古寺梵音，天光水色皆鲜活入画；叙事质朴凝练，乡土典故，风物人文妥帖融汇，毫无堆砌雕琢之感。</p><p> </p><p>通篇立足铜山，纵览古今，既有山水清幽之韵，又有故土蓬勃之姿，笔墨深情，方寸之间，写尽义亭山河之美，时代之新。</p><p> </p><p>编辑：江南</p><p> </p><p> </p><p class="empty_paragraph"> </p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/forum/20260910090126front2_0_1035910_FkrujhGAEqNEK3Wt3_NyJSzvGVR2.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="768" height="1024" data-qf-origin="forum/20260910090126front2_0_1035910_FkrujhGAEqNEK3Wt3_NyJSzvGVR2.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p class="empty_paragraph"> </p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" style="position: relative;" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/forum/20260910090226front2_0_1035910_FlEieMfA4jjEhWqcTa263CHCJvIe.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="1080" height="1749" data-qf-origin="forum/20260910090226front2_0_1035910_FlEieMfA4jjEhWqcTa263CHCJvIe.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p class="empty_paragraph"> </p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/forum/20260910090125front2_0_1035910_FqNI4qXlzgfnfcEDxcSquAxlKnYQ.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="750" height="1000" data-qf-origin="forum/20260910090125front2_0_1035910_FqNI4qXlzgfnfcEDxcSquAxlKnYQ.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p class="empty_paragraph"> </p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" style="position: relative;" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/forum/20260910090125front2_0_1035910_Fg8b-Pm-9N_0K_sKJWo0kzPcCpEa.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="699" height="907" data-qf-origin="forum/20260910090125front2_0_1035910_Fg8b-Pm-9N_0K_sKJWo0kzPcCpEa.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p> </p><p class="empty_paragraph"> </p><p> </p> <!----></div> 欣赏吴越秘书长评论佳作！:victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory: https://pics-app.cnyw.net/admin_FsbLrH4XpF1aok8fg1u_Me6G4sVj.png送出团圆月x1 https://pics-app.cnyw.net/admin_FsbLrH4XpF1aok8fg1u_Me6G4sVj.png送出团圆月x1 https://pics-app.cnyw.net/admin_FsbLrH4XpF1aok8fg1u_Me6G4sVj.png送出团圆月x1 有同感，点赞支持 http://pics-app.cnyw.net/static/gifts/11.png送出点赞x1 http://pics-app.cnyw.net/static/gifts/11.png送出点赞x1 欣赏学习，赞赞赞！
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