成老师 发表于 2026-9-25 18:39:10

同题之作：中秋

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成老师 发表于 2026-9-25 18:39:55

浅释：
首联：长空皓月高悬，银光遍洒千家万户。
颔联：群峰浸满月色，桂香萦绕家宴，庆贺丰年。
颈联：水边月华荡漾，屋舍内外欢声四起，亲人团圆相聚。
尾联升华：共同珍惜今夜良宵，愿世间常沐和风，福运绵绵。

细心的坛友 发表于 2026-9-26 10:03:18

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