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邹鲁诗歌丨记丙午谷雨德胜岩雨中登临

<!----><style type="text/css">html{font-size:375%}</style><link href="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/static/publish/css/style.css?v=20240712" rel="stylesheet" position="1" data-qf-origin="/static/publish/css/style.css?v=20240712"><!--    付费贴-->    <div class="preview_article ">            <!---->    <p>&nbsp;</p><p>记丙午谷雨德胜岩雨中登临</p><p>(邹鲁,20260420,义乌)</p><p class="empty_paragraph">&nbsp;</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/forum/20260423174049front2_0_1060230_FnG5vbCm_YkHXk-zbnN207by8n6O.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="912" height="684" data-qf-origin="forum/20260423174049front2_0_1060230_FnG5vbCm_YkHXk-zbnN207by8n6O.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>丙午谷雨,细雨绵绵。余独登稠岩,细雨沾衣,山径无人。石龟沐翠,古殿笼烟,胡公香火在微雨中愈显清寂。登高不必重阳,此日亦别有幽致。乃杂糅宋词之婉转、元曲之疏朗,不拘格律,以意行韵,自度二阕,以记一时之兴。词成,雨犹未歇,山风满袖。</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>其一&middot;【谷雨岩&middot;登稠岩】</p><p>谷雨丝丝,岩花湿透,石阶滑处春泥皱。</p><p>一山云雾半山钟,烟笼古寺如纱覆。</p><p>石龟不语,胡公依旧,千年香火风前瘦。</p><p>谁言登高只重阳?今朝也是,满袖清凉透。</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>其二&middot;【德胜雨&middot;山中归】</p><p>细雨不遮山,恰把山洗出。</p><p>石窗滴水响空谷,疑是仙人珠斛。</p><p>步虚亭外云低,杜鹃声里人独。</p><p>下山莫问春深浅,且看那、一川烟草,满城新绿。</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p>    <!----></div>            

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