菊花的脾气
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感谢楼加荣老师点评：@庸非（陈黎明）别出心裁写菊花，写它不守时序、抢先绽放，和玉簪比白、和朱砂争艳，鲜活又有趣。把菊花写得灵动任性、天真又俏皮，跳出传统咏菊的陈旧意象，视角新颖别致，读来朗朗上口，画面感十足，满是情趣与灵气！点赞！[强][强][强][玫瑰][玫瑰][玫瑰] 路过 优秀佳作！ https://pics-app.cnyw.net/admin_FsbLrH4XpF1aok8fg1u_Me6G4sVj.png送出团圆月x1 :loveliness::loveliness::loveliness::loveliness:
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