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https://pics-app.cnyw.net/admin_FsbLrH4XpF1aok8fg1u_Me6G4sVj.png送出团圆月x1 https://pics-app.cnyw.net/admin_FsbLrH4XpF1aok8fg1u_Me6G4sVj.png送出团圆月x1 https://pics-app.cnyw.net/admin_FsbLrH4XpF1aok8fg1u_Me6G4sVj.png送出团圆月x1 今日不论文字短长，只贪这满眼青绿，与同频的人共赴一场自然的诗会。图文并茂，形神兼备，同频共振！:victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory: 令人心动的好诗作，令人神往的人间仙境！:victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory: 《水竹湾》
1.意象排布疏密相宜，密林、流溪、飞瀑逐层铺展，由静入动，山野清幽的氛围感一气贯成，贴合天净沙小令短小写景的章法。
2.炼字精巧灵动，“含烟”写林间朦胧气韵，“落弦”将瀑声比作琴弦，视听相融，跳出单纯写景，多了雅致诗意。
3.收尾以水波、风影收束，柔婉恬淡，动静相映，把水竹湾清逸静谧的气韵收得含蓄悠远，余味绵长。