吴越 五律《燕雀》
<!----><style type="text/css">html{font-size:375%}</style><link href="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/static/publish/css/style.css?v=20240712" rel="stylesheet" position="1" data-qf-origin="/static/publish/css/style.css?v=20240712"><!-- 付费贴--> <div class="preview_article "> <!----> <p class="empty_paragraph"> </p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/forum/20260614130806front2_0_1035910_FgYPNX37-0UJ6t6VQ5mGzGUw-YcO.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="590" height="908" data-qf-origin="forum/20260614130806front2_0_1035910_FgYPNX37-0UJ6t6VQ5mGzGUw-YcO.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p style="font-weight: 400;"> </p><p style="font-weight: 400;">燕雀</p><p style="font-weight: 400;">托迹梁檐下，安依巷野柯。</p><p style="font-weight: 400;">闲衔枝上絮，惯拾陇头禾。</p><p style="font-weight: 400;">不慕扶摇阔，唯怜巢稚多。</p><p style="font-weight: 400;">浮生皆有寄，各自度烟萝。</p><p style="font-weight: 400;"> </p><p style="font-weight: 400;"> </p><p style="font-weight: 400;">【文墨闲人】诗书共赏 </p><p style="font-weight: 400;">这首五言律诗，为义乌人吴越所作，书法出自杨永平笔下，一诗一墨，韵味悠然，与各位同好共品。</p><p style="font-weight: 400;"> </p><p style="font-weight: 400;">全诗以燕雀为吟咏对象，章法严谨，起承转合自然流畅。首联“托迹梁檐下，安依巷野柯”，开篇便勾勒出燕雀栖息于寻常巷陌的平凡身影，奠定了恬淡自守的基调。颔联“闲衔枝上絮，惯拾陇头禾”，承接前文，以“衔絮”“拾禾”的细节描摹，展现其顺应自然、安于劳作的日常状态。颈联“不慕扶摇阔，唯怜巢稚多”笔锋一转，以“不慕鸿鹄高飞”与“唯念巢中幼雏”形成鲜明对比，一反“燕雀安知鸿鹄之志”的传统意象，赋予燕雀以珍视当下、守护温暖的精神内核。尾联“浮生皆有寄，各自度烟萝”收束全诗，由物及人，将燕雀的生存状态升华为对平凡生命的豁达认知，传递出“各有归处，各得其所”的人生态度。</p><p style="font-weight: 400;"> </p><p style="font-weight: 400;">全诗语言质朴清新，无生僻典故与华丽辞藻，兼具通俗性与文学性。以托物言志的手法，借燕雀寄寓诗人对平凡生活的认同与珍视，意境平和自适，充满了贴近生活的烟火温情与人文关怀。</p><p style="font-weight: 400;"> </p><p style="font-weight: 400;">这幅行书作品，为书法家杨永平书写吴越《燕雀》一诗。章法布局疏朗匀净，自右向左的竖排正文与左侧落款、钤印形成主次分明的视觉关系，字距行距控制得当，通篇气息贯通舒展，无拥挤逼仄之感。</p><p style="font-weight: 400;"> </p><p style="font-weight: 400;">从艺术表现来看，作品用笔以中锋为主，兼施侧锋，线条圆劲温润，转折圆转流畅，点画起收干净利落，既保留了行书的灵动意趣，又兼具楷书的端庄法度。</p><p style="font-weight: 400;"> </p><p style="font-weight: 400;">书风整体温润清和，属文人行书一路，无狂放跌宕的笔势，也无刻意求奇的姿态，而是以从容不迫的书写节奏，传递出平和内敛的气息。作品既有传统帖学的清雅韵致，又融入了当代书写的自然意趣，格调高古而不晦涩，平易而不俗气，与吴越《燕雀》诗所传递的安适心境深度呼应，实现了“书为心画，以笔传情”的表达效果。</p><p style="font-weight: 400;"> </p><p style="font-weight: 400;">6月14日</p><p style="font-weight: 400;"> </p><p style="font-weight: 400;"> </p><p style="font-weight: 400;"> </p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/forum/20260614130535front2_0_1035910_FgYPNX37-0UJ6t6VQ5mGzGUw-YcO.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="590" height="908" data-qf-origin="forum/20260614130535front2_0_1035910_FgYPNX37-0UJ6t6VQ5mGzGUw-YcO.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p class="empty_paragraph" style="font-weight: 400;"> </p> <!----></div> 欣赏吴越社长诗歌和书法佳作，超赞！:victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory: https://pics-app.cnyw.net/admin_FsbLrH4XpF1aok8fg1u_Me6G4sVj.png送出团圆月x1 https://pics-app.cnyw.net/admin_FsbLrH4XpF1aok8fg1u_Me6G4sVj.png送出团圆月x1 https://pics-app.cnyw.net/admin_FsbLrH4XpF1aok8fg1u_Me6G4sVj.png送出团圆月x1 :P:P:P 精彩佳作！妙笔生花！ 欣赏学习，赞赞赞！
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