【诗歌鉴赏】莲蓬
<!----><style type="text/css">html{font-size:375%}</style><link href="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/static/publish/css/style.css?v=20240712" rel="stylesheet" position="1" data-qf-origin="/static/publish/css/style.css?v=20240712"><!-- 付费贴--> <div class="preview_article "> <!----> <h2 data-track="1" data-pm-slice="1 1 []"><strong>莲蓬</strong></h2><p data-track="1" data-pm-slice="1 1 []"> </p><p data-track="2">文/金应天</p><p class="empty_paragraph"> </p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/forum/20260615183549front2_0_369140_FsG5jSu1dNJ1lkJsEtZPobYSkYbl.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="1439" height="1080" data-qf-origin="forum/20260615183549front2_0_369140_FsG5jSu1dNJ1lkJsEtZPobYSkYbl.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p data-track="3">曲院偶遇，颔首的</p><p data-track="4">一朵，讲着青春的故事</p><p data-track="5">在夏末打着秋风</p><p data-track="6">向渐渐衰老的荷衣致敬</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/forum/20260615183602front2_0_369140_FmGqn3f4d4TrE-QMye5zhbkTXsjF.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="1080" height="1630" data-qf-origin="forum/20260615183602front2_0_369140_FmGqn3f4d4TrE-QMye5zhbkTXsjF.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p data-track="7">淡香依然扑面，不作掩藏</p><p data-track="8">没有吝啬，带着花的遗韵</p><p data-track="9">发出公开邀请</p><p data-track="10">过往，接踵而来</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/forum/20260615183615front2_0_369140_FkAZ_FoW6BtNCouvJOOm0N5VTwUd.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="640" height="672" data-qf-origin="forum/20260615183615front2_0_369140_FkAZ_FoW6BtNCouvJOOm0N5VTwUd.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p data-track="11">被翡翠般藏匿的心思</p><p data-track="12">纯白的跟水晶一样</p><p data-track="13">啜饮着春夏情汁</p><p data-track="14">从污泥中长成</p><p class="empty_paragraph"> </p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/forum/20260615183630front2_0_369140_FkAZ_FoW6BtNCouvJOOm0N5VTwUd.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="640" height="672" data-qf-origin="forum/20260615183630front2_0_369140_FkAZ_FoW6BtNCouvJOOm0N5VTwUd.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p data-track="20">【赏析】</p><p data-track="20"> </p><p data-track="21">整首小诗以莲蓬为意象，借荷的一生写本心与成长，层次清浅却余味绵长。</p><p data-track="21"> </p><p data-track="22">开篇取景曲院荷塘，低头垂落的莲蓬自带谦卑姿态，夏末秋风、残荷旧衣对照盛放花期，一瞬便拉开时光落差，怀旧感自然铺开。</p><p data-track="22"> </p><p data-track="23">中段写残荷余香不敛，散尽温柔，主动容纳所有过往，把凋零写得坦荡豁达，不见伤秋悲戚，反倒有从容气度。</p><p data-track="23"> </p><p data-track="24">末段落笔莲籽，青绿外壳藏剔透本心，扎根浊泥却吸纳四季清润情愫，暗合出淤泥而不染的内核，不刻意说教，只借莲蓬生长道尽纯粹坚韧。</p><p data-track="24"> </p><p data-track="25">文字清淡温润，意象连贯统一，景、情、理相融，短小却意蕴饱满。</p><p> </p> <!----></div> 欣赏学习，赞赞赞:victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory: https://pics-app.cnyw.net/admin_FsbLrH4XpF1aok8fg1u_Me6G4sVj.png送出团圆月x1 https://pics-app.cnyw.net/admin_FsbLrH4XpF1aok8fg1u_Me6G4sVj.png送出团圆月x1 :time::time::time: :D:D:D:D 点赞！:victory::victory::victory: :time::time::time: 水泽之处，有人赏荷，暖阳之下，有诗问柳，光阴，总在不动生色的更替，而温暖，一直都在。柔软而细碎的光阴，总在生命中暗香盈袖，让人怀念和回望。曾经是那么渴望抵达，憧憬着遇见的美好，而今却学会了退却青涩，面对现实，感受幸福，善待悲欢。
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