金襄 发表于 2026-6-27 12:04:23

【荐读】铸剑

<!----><style type="text/css">html{font-size:375%}</style><link href="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/static/publish/css/style.css?v=20240712" rel="stylesheet" position="1" data-qf-origin="/static/publish/css/style.css?v=20240712"><!--    付费贴-->    <div class="preview_article ">            <!---->    <p>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; <strong>&nbsp; 铸剑</strong></p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;作者：叶军</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/forum/20260627120343front2_0_369140_FlMedzvMbBLG24vfJVgevnZOySFU.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="884" height="484" data-qf-origin="forum/20260627120343front2_0_369140_FlMedzvMbBLG24vfJVgevnZOySFU.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>无人和你说话</p><p>山风，静默上岸，回望时间长河</p><p>握笔的手，如刃出鞘</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>干将莫邪，谁与争锋</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>一轮月亮</p><p>无人和你对话，除了那坚硬的石头，粮食</p><p>铸剑</p><p>照亮神州大地</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>【赏析】</p><p>这首《铸剑》以干将莫邪的典故为骨，将握笔与铸剑并置，文字里藏着锋利的力量。山风、冷月、寒石，环境清寂孤冷，&ldquo;无人和你说话&rdquo;重复落笔，衬出独守初心的沉静。笔即是剑，心火可照神州，于孤绝之中生出浩荡气魄，刚劲又克制。</p>    <!----></div>            

成老师 发表于 2026-6-27 15:25:43

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成老师 发表于 2026-6-27 15:25:57

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金襄 发表于 7 天前

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