【诗歌鉴赏】露珠
<!----><style type="text/css">html{font-size:375%}</style><link href="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/static/publish/css/style.css?v=20240712" rel="stylesheet" position="1" data-qf-origin="/static/publish/css/style.css?v=20240712"><!-- 付费贴--> <div class="preview_article "> <!----> <h2><strong> 露珠</strong></h2><p> </p><p> 文/金应天</p><p class="empty_paragraph"> </p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/forum/20260630110313front2_0_369140_Fm6aSxsynagLKnJSHX-BuslY22MO.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="880" height="484" data-qf-origin="forum/20260630110313front2_0_369140_Fm6aSxsynagLKnJSHX-BuslY22MO.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p> </p><p>一颗露珠</p><p>在莲叶上滚动</p><p>无人问津的渺小</p><p>始终晶莹剔透</p><p>包容了所有世相</p><p> </p><p>灼灼的目光</p><p>把露水烤干</p><p>舒卷的流云</p><p>总自以为是</p><p>住进了眸中</p><p> </p><p>一把欲望</p><p>从体内掏出</p><p>点燃太阳</p><p>劝说云</p><p>“可曾向往大海？”</p><p>我愿化作一滴晨露</p><p>从海的童年</p><p>走向浩瀚的东方</p><p> </p><p>【赏析】</p><p> </p><p>这首小诗以露珠为核心意象，由微至宏，层次流转十分漂亮。</p><p> </p><p>开篇落于莲叶清露，承认自身微小，却保有通透，是一种向内的澄澈；烈日将露珠蒸散，视线转向流云，生出一层矛盾——流云自在，却又轻易占据人的目光。</p><p> </p><p> 末段落笔“欲望”，写法大胆：将心底执念取出，与烈日相融，继而向云发问，完成视角的跳转。</p><p> </p><p>末句收束是全诗升华：不再执着莲叶上短暂的一滴，甘愿回溯大海的本源，以晨露之微，奔赴辽阔东方。 渺小与宏大、短暂与永恒、欲望与理想交织在一起。</p><p> </p><p>露珠不再只是景物，是诗人自我的投射：纵使转瞬消散，仍不忘溯源大海，心怀辽阔。</p> <!----></div> 欣赏学习！ https://pics-app.cnyw.net/admin_FsbLrH4XpF1aok8fg1u_Me6G4sVj.png送出团圆月x1 纵使转瞬消散，仍不忘溯源大海，心怀辽阔。:victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory::victory: :time::time::time: :P:P:P:P 点赞！:victory::victory::victory: :time::time::time:
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