【诗歌鉴赏】蝉噪林逾静
<!----><style type="text/css">html{font-size:375%}</style><link href="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/static/publish/css/style.css?v=20240712" rel="stylesheet" position="1" data-qf-origin="/static/publish/css/style.css?v=20240712"><!-- 付费贴--> <div class="preview_article "> <!----> <p> <strong> 蝉噪林逾静</strong></p><p> </p><p> 文／金应天</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="https://pics-app.cnyw.net/forum/20260707053025front2_0_369140_FuraELWmNZezt-vxrRtU7e1SoDLG.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" alt="" width="884" height="1192" data-qf-origin="forum/20260707053025front2_0_369140_FuraELWmNZezt-vxrRtU7e1SoDLG.jpg?watermark/1/image/aHR0cDovL3BpY3MtYXBwLmNueXcubmV0L18yMDE5MDQyNTA5MTYwMF81Y2MxMGE1MDc5ZjY2LnBuZw==/dissolve/100/gravity/SouthEast" /></p><p> </p><p>炎炎的夏日</p><p>烈火炙烤着大地</p><p>万木枝头的绿叶</p><p>疲软无力地抗争</p><p> </p><p>“吱——”</p><p>知了面对太阳</p><p>哭的几声凄屑</p><p>问君有几多冤</p><p>知向谁诉</p><p> </p><p>树木面面相觑</p><p>枝条纷纷摇头</p><p>带嘲的看客</p><p>沉默的无动于衷</p><p> </p><p>阳光仿佛神经麻木</p><p>拒不受理</p><p>知了坚韧的抗诉</p><p>把不屈演绎得淋漓尽致</p><p> </p><p>涌动的暗流</p><p>终折服于执着的坚守</p><p>生命的赞歌</p><p>当用生命诉说</p><p> </p><p>【赏析】</p><p> </p><p>该诗取王籍名句为题，却跳出原诗清幽空灵的意境，赋予蝉鸣一层悲壮的抗争色彩。</p><p> </p><p>夏日酷暑为底色，知了不再是闲情景致里的点缀，反而化作满腹委屈、奋力抗诉的弱者。草木冷眼旁观，烈日漠然无情，世间众人皆为冷漠看客。</p><p> </p><p>最动人的是转折：纵然无人倾听，蝉依旧拼尽余力嘶鸣。它的鸣叫不是哀哭，是生命本身的坚守。结尾收束有力，点明真正的生命颂歌，是以自身全部生命去发声。</p><p> </p><p>以蝉喻人，借夏日小景写人世冷暖，安静的林间，蝉的嘶叫越响亮，周遭的冷漠沉寂便愈发清晰，扣紧题目“蝉噪林逾静”更深一层的孤独。</p> <!----></div> 欣赏学习 https://pics-app.cnyw.net/admin_FsbLrH4XpF1aok8fg1u_Me6G4sVj.png送出团圆月x1 :time::time::time:
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